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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 20, 2011 3:05:37 GMT -6
Does this color scheme work for this character thus far, yay or nay? Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 20, 2011 10:06:28 GMT -6
a Dark theme. *thumbs up* I'm not feeling the hair colors or the hair style,can't quite figure out which it is yet, maybe a brighter color for the scarf around his neck but maintain the dark theme. A color like burgundy [ something brighter but still dark at the same time].....i hope you understand what i mean. The scarf and the actual clothing are contrasting too much. I can always count on you for help lol. I know what you mean about the scarf, it currently looks a bit flat. Initially, I wanted a lighter color for the scarf, but I couldn't figure out one that would work for her at the time, but I'll try the light burgundy. Also the orange is not a part of her hair, its feathers lol. I was trying to be unique or something, does knowing this change anything or you're still not feeling it?
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Post by Swag~arashi on Jul 20, 2011 11:47:17 GMT -6
Same Maito. I really can't put my finger on whether it's color or the style... I think I may be leaning towards style... I'm not sure though.
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 20, 2011 19:33:56 GMT -6
Alright, ima edit that later, but here go my other character design... Uploaded with ImageShack.usLol but seriously, just trying to learn how to do Pencil shading in photoshop. This one could have been good but it turned out bad because I was too anxious and started shading before I even finished the sketch.
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Post by Swag~arashi on Jul 21, 2011 0:41:11 GMT -6
What he said... damnit I'll reply first so help me god!
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 21, 2011 6:13:01 GMT -6
Na, that's not what you want, you want some eye candy. But on a serious note, I'm not going to re-do that Goku, I was just seeing what I can do. But anyway, here's my new one, I spent hours on it and its still incomplete: Uploaded with ImageShack.usFirst time I ever shaded hair.... I spent so many hours on that alone.
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Post by Swag~arashi on Jul 21, 2011 10:51:52 GMT -6
No. Don't give in. I'll win on my own terms tyvm. I don't need your pity!
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 21, 2011 13:31:41 GMT -6
Refer to my previous post for the updated version of the drawing
Yes that's a mask that she's wearing, she's a ninja. I decided that because even though I am the artist, I am a little confused; she looks like a mixture between anime and realistic so I wasn't sure which kind of lips/mouth would work best.
Ok, I think the boob was looking weird because of how dark it's outline was so I thinned that line. The hand... uhhh, I started shading the hair before I had a good hand outline (I didn't realize the hand sketch was bad until the whole picture started forming) and now I don't really know how to fix it unless I erase the whole hand and start anew, but I tried modifying it.
I don't know if I am going to color this because I can't color. I might try painting it for the practice, but I doubt I'd post it.
Thanks for the comments/criticisms. More to come soon
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 21, 2011 18:41:39 GMT -6
Lazily laid down some coloring to see how it may look (which is why I am drastically outside of the lines), but I can't really tell if it looks better or not so I need feedback. Should I color it however, I think yellow for the panties is a more suiting color and black for the mask?
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Post by kirin on Jul 21, 2011 18:52:41 GMT -6
Lazily laid down some coloring to see how it may look (which is why I am drastically outside of the lines), but I can't really tell if it looks better or not so I need feedback. Should I color it however, I think yellow for the panties is a more suiting color and black for the mask? Uploaded with ImageShack.usWell you see.... The way you did "her" face structure(mostly under the eyes) makes it look like a guy with boobs.
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 21, 2011 21:43:35 GMT -6
Check my previous post for the updated picture
Lol I appreciate your feed back, but I hope you understand that that is sort of confusing for "face structure (mostly under the eyes)" is very vague. I'm not seeing what you are seeing, but obviously I don't think you're crazy and you have a reason for saying this. Therefore, I accentuated some eyelashses and eyebrows; im guessing this will make her look more feminine because that's what a lot of artists do, exaggerate eyebrows/eyelashes for females.
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Post by Swag~arashi on Jul 21, 2011 22:42:13 GMT -6
Her face seems a bit too bright I thought it was lighting but I don't notice it anywhere on the back. I also noticed a really sharp corner thing on the left side slightly above the underwear. Looks a bit strange to me.
That's all I noticed
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 21, 2011 23:03:36 GMT -6
Oh I accidently removed the pictures from my imageshack album. Anyways Wagarashi, I'm not sure if I got to what you were talking about on the sharp corner, here, if I didn't can you please circle it or something. Also as for the lighting, refer to the black and white drawing because I cannot color lol. Repost Image: Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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Post by kirin on Jul 21, 2011 23:56:26 GMT -6
Better @.@
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 22, 2011 6:23:24 GMT -6
Stupid Imageshack removed them, let me try Photobucket:
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 22, 2011 16:30:21 GMT -6
I can't tell whether or not I like this picture colored for me to decide whether or not to clean up and apply proper coloring or not.
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Post by ChefBoyRD on Jul 28, 2011 5:02:52 GMT -6
I still be drawing! Here goes a reference sheet for my character Wynd. This is not an informational sheet, it's a reference sheet meaning it won't go into detail telling you about him, it's merely for getting down his look, facial expressions, etc. note: cropped it by 50% note2: just practicing some painting in the last "square" first time doing a landscape... I'm trying... note3: I wasn't looking for cleanliness/crispness which is why I colored directly over the sketched lines without erasing them, etc. Uploaded with ImageShack.us
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2011 15:46:08 GMT -6
i like that :3
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